First Masterpiece Presentation

The first presentation included things that caught my eye. The first being that the presenter was talking in a formal way to the audience. I like when the presenter does this because it feel like we are getting to know him more. He was not so professional like a professor or teacher. I could also see how passionate he was about the topic which was music and playing guitar. The stories he told us and the hand gestures he used made it obvious he was serious and passionate abut what he was saying. He did repeat a lot of words like "You know" or "Like". He also contradicted himself throughout the presentation, but overall he did good.

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